MEEP featured as a DLD on 12/6/2012. Thank you so much to ~SurrealCachinnation
for suggesting and =SilverInkblot
I dunno how I feel about this one. I was feeling the pine trees, but I also wanted to write something for my 100 Poem Project topic "voodoo," which I've written into a lot of poems, but which I haven't had as the main sort of "theme."
I'd love critique on the following:
1) I'm not entirely sure about the imagery in section 3. I love the giraffe image, and I feel like I can really ONLY say what I mean with that image, but it JUST DOESN'T FIT. Thoughts?
2) How's the flow?
3) I don't normally title my sections, but it felt right, somehow, in this piece. Do they work? Do they help build the story, detract from it, or do they seem meaningless?