WOO HOO! MORE ORAL LITERATURE!
I created my own fable
This was fun. I was inspired by today's NaPoWriMo prompt
, and by Peter Gabriel's Down to Earth
(from the end credits of Wall-e!). Composed for my 100 Poem Project!
I had fun creating an Aesop-esque fable, but I tried turning it on its head a little bit. See if you can figure out how
Not entirely sure about how smoothly this reads. Oral literature is so different from simply prose or poetry, but I was still definitely trying to write a poem. Any comments to this effect are greatly appreciated.
I'm also worried about the flow in general, in terms of the balance of story and imagery. Thoughts?
All comments welcome!
PS. YES, SPARROW AND FOX ARE BOTH MALE. The point of the story isn't their sexuality.