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The rain flows down my face as I stand hypnotized,
Watching the drops break like glass,
And spray like sparks over the driveway.
The artificial moon
Is blurred, orange, and false,
And perches on the pole like a decrepit bird
And weakly beats back the darkness.
And it reminds me of the moon, the stars of that night,
And as I stand there remembering,
Saltier drops fall to join the rain
That runs away into the sea.
Watching the drops break like glass,
And spray like sparks over the driveway.
The artificial moon
Is blurred, orange, and false,
And perches on the pole like a decrepit bird
And weakly beats back the darkness.
And it reminds me of the moon, the stars of that night,
And as I stand there remembering,
Saltier drops fall to join the rain
That runs away into the sea.
i do love the imagery in this poem...
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The artificial moon
Is blurred, orange, and false,
And perches on the pole like a decrepit bird
Fantastic similie there.
And I agree with everyone about the imagery thing.
Is blurred, orange, and false,
And perches on the pole like a decrepit bird
Fantastic similie there.
And I agree with everyone about the imagery thing.