OH, LUXURIOUS FREE VERSE, HOW I MISSED YOU!
Yeah. DFC '12 didn't end up finished, sadly. I will definitely keep those forms in mind for when I want to try one, but...
I'm so not a form person.
Wrote this after another trip to and from Asheville. Seriously, the Blue Mountains were bluer than I've ever seen them. I also can't claim total credit for that flute line. It was inspired by a song in the film Jodhaa Akbar.
British spellings in this were kinda for fun, kinda for the fact that they just FEEL right, somehow.
What do you think of the imagery? Does it flow well?
Do you find there is enough of a narrative arc? Does the piece make sense?
How do you like the grammar/spelling/punctuation?
Thanks for reading!