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From Mars with Love

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I am still new to writing verse.
Forgive me, I know it's ghastly,
But you're my entire universe,
My love, you're the laws that bind me.

Mars is lovely this time of year,
Please, my love, come visit me here:
The red dust in our eyes like dew—
My heart-gears will turn just for you.
A rispetto! In iambic tetrameter. I chose to go a bit silly ^^ DFC '12, December 1 (a few days late) :iconprojectdfc: [link]

Real title: "A Love Letter, Written for but Never Given to, Isaac Asimov, From Mars"

Despite the minimal imagery...I hope you enjoy, haha ;)
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you are the ray of dark sunshine in my life
the demon who saved my soul
that which made me wanna live again
heaven is hell & hell heaven
sense not ye be made of want
the heart sees what the eyes can not